DA Assignment 2

name : fitriya dessi wulandari

nim    : A320100187

Writing Summary by Fitri Nurwiyanti

An article in Campus magazine entitled “Publics Participation For Education” by Miftakhul Khoiri presents the first school Taman Siswa built by Ki Hajar Dewantara. Education paradigm is growing in Indonesia to fulfill the sprit of education these days. Citizens should get competent education. Education is responsibility by government and the side of private sector individual and group. Because of limited cost, the government opens the opportunity for public to participate and develop business education such as; building opening schools, courses, or skill education with facilities more complete and better than government schools. Supported by complete and good facilities make this school rather expensive because it also promises the good management on its education.

Indonesia has pesantren as education system (Islamic boarding house models). It is classified into two models: First Traditional, it does not collect the payment from the students and students can stay and study freely. They study about Islamic science for the sake of individual and public. The traditional pesantren still be one choice by our society under class social. Second, Modern pesantren collects the payment of the students because it gives more ability and knowledge for students. They do not only study about Islam but also other sciences like Biology, Mathematics, Economics, Physics, Language and Art. They are prepared to face the era that always changes.

Without already realized the friction that could be happened from motivation of organizer and management of existing education. To get the good education with their equipment of facility they perform forced the citizen get dealing with power of bargain and faces the reality of expensive school and that also is for rich man children. Poor people who have not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education. Government and private sector individually and group have big homework to repair their education inspect that aims on making organization of education.

I agree with the writer who says that about publics participation for education is importance. He says that the education not only managed by government, but also the society has contribution to build education together, about how they create good education, both the facilities, system and soon. The government should think that all the society level can enjoy education reasonably. Moreover, to get good education with equipment of facility they perform to force the citizen get the power of bargain and faces the reality of expensive school and that also is for rich man children. I think that the middle society should optimalize brilliant brain to be able to compete with others. The writer says that the poor people who have not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education. I think that this statement is true. The government and the private school should really provide scholarship for the students who have competence to enjoy education.

Analysis :

Paragraph 1

• An article : is a demonstrative kataforik reference, because its refers to the written text with the tittle “Publics Participation For Education”
• This days, discourse analysis, means condition or time when the article was made.
• And is additive conjunction that correlate the government and side of private sector individual.
• Because of is casual conjunction referring to the statement, “the government opens the opportunity for public to participate and develop business education….”
• This school, is a substitution means that private school which has complete facilities od better than government school.

Paragraph 2

• It, is demonstrative  anaforik reference and refers to pesantren
• First is temporal conjunction.
• They, is demonstrative anaforik reference and referring to students in traditional pesantren.
• It is demonstrative anaforik reference, referring to modern pesantren.
• “Biology, Mathematics,….” Is a collocation with science.
• They is demonstrative anaforik reference, referring to students in modern pesantren.

Paragraph 3

• Their is demonstrative anaforik reference referring to good education.
• They is demonstrative  anaforik reference referring to good education.
• They is anaforik reference referring to poor people.
• Their is anaforik reference referring to poor people.

Paragraph 4

• I is personal anaforik reference referring to Fitri.
• The writer is personal anaforik reference referring to Miftakhul Choiri.
• He is personal anaforik reference referring to Miftakhul Choiri.
• They is demonstrative anaforik reference referring to the government and society.
• Moreover is additional conjunction.
• They is demonstrative anafforik reference referring to good education.
• This statement is verbal substitution referring to  the writer says that the poor people who have not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education.

DA Assignment 1 "What discourse study is"

name : fitriya dessi wulandari
nim    : a320100187
class  : C

1.      The answers of David Nunan’s Book.

1a. the meaning of text is there was rebellion when the Liberation party go on. And the police gave information that 135 people were died in Bujumbura and also 137 people in Bubanza and Northern provinces of Citiboke.  Although the place was saved, security still stands guard in this area. And in central African there was rebellion too. 272 people were killed by rebel.

1b. two people had been killed by the rebel who had refused the instruction from them. So the government gave command to police to investigate it. When the investigation 20 members of rebbel were died by rural vigilantes armed. Because their partner was died by the police, they wes celebrate him in “armed strike“.

1c. “At least 14 people died on Saturday after drinking a cheap alcoholic beverage, raising to 20 the number of people killed by the poisonous brew in two days, news report said.

The reporter give information if on Saturday there were 14 people was died by alcohol. Because the price of beverage is cheaper so the quality of alcohol is evil. The people drink the beverage abnormally, they body refused so they killed himself/

“The quake measured 5.7 on the Richter scale and was felt shortly before 10.05 am (0850 GMT) Bucharest radio quoted on official report as saying.”

Bucharest radio gives information about the earth quake. After that, an earthquake was happened. So any people can fell it, because they concentrate with their activity.

“judge Neil Dennsion said Robert Phee, 23, a technician on the hit musical “Miss Saigon”, was “gripped by the excitement and theatrically” of his eight robberies which netted him 15,000 pounds.”

The man who has job in musical product was surprised with the thief. The robber was pick up his money. The information was showed by reporter.

So, the Discourse Study is the way that we have to know what the meaning behind the meaning and it can be the study of language use. 

 

 

 2.      An article

Fauzi Bowo’s popularity, fortunes most attractive to parties: expert

The Jakarta Post, Jakarta | Thu, 03/15/2012 12:41 PM

A | A | A |

Fauzi Bowo: (Tribunnews.com/Herudin)

Political expert Muhammad Qodari has said that despite criticisms of incumbent Jakarta governor Fauzi Bowo’s leadership qualities, he was still considered the favorite of the political parties for the upcoming elections thanks to his popularity and, of course, political fortunes.

“Whoever becomes his deputy, will have a big opportunity to win the gubernatorial seat in the 2017 Jakarta gubernatorial elections,” Qodari, a researcher at Indobarometer, said on Thursday as quoted by tribunnews.com.

However, Qodari didn’t elaborate on how precisely Fauzi’s fortunes would play a role in the upcoming elections. To date, at least two of the big political parties have announced an interest in naming Fauzi, popularly known as Foke, as their candidate for the election. They are the Democratic Party, of which Fauzi is the Jakarta chapter chief, and the Indonesian Democratic Party of Struggle (PDI-P) who may opt to abandon their own potential runner Surakarta mayor Joko Widodo and pick Fauzi as their candidate.(dic)

 The analysis:

A.    Deixis

1.      Person Deixis

a.       He was still considered the favorite of the political parties for the upcoming elections thanks to his popularity and, of course, political fortunes.

b.      “Whoever becomes his deputy, will have a big opportunity to win the gubernatorial seat in the 2017 Jakarta gubernatorial elections,” Qodari

c.       They are the Democratic Party, of which Fauzi is the Jakarta chapter chief, and the Indonesian Democratic Party of Struggle (PDI-P) who may opt to abandon their own potential runner Surakarta mayor Joko Widodo and pick Fauzi as their candidate.

2.      Spatial Deixis

There is no spatial deixis.

3.      Temporal Deixis

a.       Qodari, a researcher at Indobarometer, said on Thursday as quoted by tribunnews.com.

b.      To date, at least two of the big political parties have announced an interest in naming Fauzi, popularly known as Foke, as their candidate for the election.

4.      Social Deixis

The relationship between Fauzi Bowo and Muhamad Qodari is the person who inform and the political expert.

B.     Cohesion

1.      Substitution

There is no substitution.

2.      Ellipsis

To date, at least two of the big political parties have announced an interest in naming Fauzi, popularly known as Foke, as their candidate for the election. They are the Democratic Party, of which Fauzi is the Jakarta chapter chief, and the Indonesian Democratic Party of Struggle (PDI-P) who may opt to abandon their own potential runner Surakarta mayor Joko Widodo and pick Fauzi as their candidate.

-          Candidate means candidate for election.

3.      Reference

There is no reference.

4.      Conjunction

They are the Democratic Party, of which Fauzi is the Jakarta chapter chief, and the Indonesian Democratic Party of Struggle (PDI-P) who may opt to abandon their own potential runner Surakarta mayor Joko Widodo and pick Fauzi as their candidate.

5.      Lexical Cohesion

There is no lexical cohesion.